Thanks, Natalie. I just came back from camping where I had taken Endymion Spring for a little light fantasy reading and found it just plain bad. Sexism and computerism aside, it has so many inconsistencies (leave a chair, return to a desk) that I doubt it ever really saw an editor. There's not a chapter that would make it by my writer's group unaltered.
actually, you are wrong, actually, the book has a girl, Coster's granddaughter, the 6-years-old girl who saw the dragon and the why Coster had the skin
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Thanks, Natalie. I just came back from camping where I had taken Endymion Spring for a little light fantasy reading and found it just plain bad. Sexism and computerism aside, it has so many inconsistencies (leave a chair, return to a desk) that I doubt it ever really saw an editor. There's not a chapter that would make it by my writer's group unaltered.
actually, you are wrong, actually, the book has a girl, Coster's granddaughter, the 6-years-old girl who saw the dragon and the why Coster had the skin
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